Fall in Love Again

Fall in Love Again

A Poem by JoyMarieGold

There's just something about you

I don't know what it is.

It circles around and around

Like a cloud in a storm.

But unlike the storm it's gentle

Flowing like a breeze on a hot day.

It's unusal for this to happen

But I guess it happens.

 

If only I could turn time around

Change up the chemistry

Maybe we could find everything

Maybe we could fall in love again

 

My heart beats like the sound of drums

The sound of African drums in the desert

Celebrating life and love

Your eyes weave a song into my soul

A thousand times more beautiful than just music

It shatters my heart with it's blinding beauty

A thousand ways it could be said

That one could die instead

 

Heat as like the summer

Like buring down the twin towers

setting my soul with passion afire

Only one can know this power

 

But how could I know

When everything is hidden in darkness

How could I see your face

If my eyes have turned blind

How could I hear

If my ears have gone deaf

If only you had shown

How could I know

 

If only you could see

all the damage you do to me

If you could just let it be

Maybe we could change the world... with our love.

© 2011 JoyMarieGold


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The edit is - a heart toucher... by any view.

Chris

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This starts sooooooo well. The first is so promising then the second flows... and the third tangents and the forth becomes a chorus and the magyk is taken away. Least for me.

Chris

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this one.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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