Fatigue

Fatigue

A Poem by JourneyBlu

Fatal fatigue

My mind lays blank

Flashes of fragmented words

Ideas I cannot comprehend

Fueled by insomniatic insanity

Fleeting focus

And already that thought is gone

© 2012 JourneyBlu


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This reminds me of when I was a new mother. All the sleepless nights.
Great job of expressing the way complete tiredness feels.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is potent and to the point! I love it on every level as it speaks to me!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JourneyBlu

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words!
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

12 Years Ago

You are an amzing writer! I have been stuck on your page for a hot minute reading your work! Just wo.. read more
LOL! You sound like a writer.

Well done...


Greg :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 20, 2012
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JourneyBlu
JourneyBlu

Marion, IA



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I am a mother of four wonderful children. I live in Marion, IA and I write poetry. I just self-published my first poetry book this year titled Whispers of Never. I am currently working on my second bo.. more..

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