The Loss of Him

I carried a baby on my hip,
and unborn son from years past.
In and absolute world,
he would've swam longer within my womb.

The loss of him,
caused a piece of my heart to dissolve.
A hole that only aches,
when the wind blows.

And there is a strong wind,
that forces me to cause winter;
Like a guilt stricken Demeter
sick with the yearning for a child Hades posses.

Reviews

[TJ]

The pain in this is so visceral. I can literally feel it. What a sad experience and you portray it so wholly.
Great

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Soli this is very well penned but so sad also. Don't you know all babies go to heaven. They get a free pass. xoxo

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

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I have no words to express how I feel right now.

[WynterPhoenix]

This is very powerful and emotional write. Thank you for sharing.

[SpokenWord]

Wow such a deep struggle here full of pain I can't imagine losing a child not alone a baby. I felt the emotions in this one, nice job.