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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Gluttony

Gluttony

A Poem by Solidad

There are things we don't discuss,
between the planes of marriage and lust.

Wanting only what we can't have,
it separates our ribs.

Self loathing comes after,
murdering founded truths.

Knowing all consequences,
we still trespassed.

With the knowledge,
of always coming up empty handed.

Because within the confines of our fantasies,
we always eat with our eyes.

© 2011 Solidad


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TJ
"Because within the confines of our fantasies,
we always eat with our eyes."

Wonderful piece. Human desire is so string and undying, we will always chase that which we shouldn't have, can't have, don't have; even if we already have everything. Gluttons we all are.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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TJ
"Because within the confines of our fantasies,
we always eat with our eyes."

Wonderful piece. Human desire is so string and undying, we will always chase that which we shouldn't have, can't have, don't have; even if we already have everything. Gluttons we all are.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soli what an amazing piece, the hidden meaning you have worded it so well. I really love this piece. : )

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"murdering founded truths."

Love this. Great piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We drink in with our eyes and yes often we eat with them too. What an amazing piece Solidad.

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