C.Barrs

She,
Is light years beyond beautiful.

Like luke warm water,
She engulfs with a comfort,

From a heart so deep,
She stills the ache in my bones.

Dividing me by each sinew,
She melts in to being.

A soft touch,
An erect,

Dream.

Fingertips of satin,
As she sprinkles kisses like powered sugar,

Over and through me.
Feeding my desire,

With a decadent caress.
She parts my lips.

With candied words,
A vernacular the sorts of demi gods.

Whispering her name across my neck,
I forget the syllables as I thrust,

Deeply into her,
Thoughts.

She is all that's been plagiarized,
Abused by coat tail riders.

Yet there is still room,
For me under her skin.

She is Carpe Diem,
Her heart the warmest place the sun never shown.

She weeps lithium saturated tears,
Licking her blistering wounds in private.

I soak her in,
Bathing in her innocence.

"If I only could make a deal with god,
And get him to swap our places..."

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem packs a double punch. I felt privileged to behold the sight of such a marvelous spirit...and also blown away by the intimate secrets you explored which never surface from the depths of our souls. The imagery is powerful because of it's uncensored nature. You are an explorer of the emotional places we are afraid to go to....and avoid at all costs.

"She weeps lithium saturated tears,
Licking her blistering wounds in private"

This was brilliant alone...but the way you set it up was even more so. The passion and sorrow's synergy made this poem complete. There are many skills you use well...but the fact that every word is so strategically places usually leaves the biggest impression.