No

No

A Poem by Solidad

He said, "Forever."
So he gave me a diamond
and I said, "No."

© 2010 Solidad


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How did this beautiful vacation in Jamaica turn into
A cold windy snowy night in Chicago as soon as I hit that last line? lol

You said a multitude of things with these few syllables.
Sad yes...but she is no villain for being honest.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect so few words such a GREAT STRONG MEANING!!! Well done my friend. xoxo

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply Strong on its own

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahahah :) made me laugh.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's really sad TT~TT...

I liked it! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A girl that knows what she doesn't want! Good for you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha I suppose so. Something different. I'm trying my hand at getting to the point. And no the diamond wasn't too small sometimes love just doesn't pan out lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


Was the diamond too small? Looks like you're already getting hooked on 5-7-5. Happens to the best of us. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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