Unseenly neglectedA Poem by FANTASYKNIGHTThis poem is relatively hard to understand, and i tried to use a few metaphors, in some cases successfuly, in others a bit more subtly.A neglected shaddow treads with heavy feet, made known by a light uncast, unkown, through eyes unseen. A yearning for the sun chased as before, a heart's content to shine. Foot set along, tread by tread, through disillusioned eyes the glow gleams brighter, dripping gold sweet honey. Tread by tread, foot set lighter, brighter, brighter. Then, a shaddow cast the twilight curse, unseen, mournful, miserable, darkness, upon dawn, is set free. Foot set along, tread by tread. © 2011 FANTASYKNIGHTAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorFANTASYKNIGHTCape Town, Stellenbosch, South AfricaAboutA few forewords: Outgoing, extreme, sports, crazy, musical, creative, loving, romantic. The first impression of me could suggest anything but poetry, here's some more about me... My name is Josu.. more..Writing
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