Be Mine

A poem for a girl who was very far away, and whom i've endelessly fantasized about.... the product of my thoughts, in a completely surreal world.

A voice I so seek,
Waiting upon time.
My strength turned to lust,
to this name I so mime.

A face saturated in memories,
Beauty trickled by gold.
A soft mysterious touch,
you hand to safely hold.

Entranced by a magical stare,
starshine eyes enrich your presence.
Moonlight romance a moment to share,
Beauty reflected Love be your essence.

A smile I so seek,
my hearts content so shine.
In this romantic starlit mystery,
Would you be mine.

Author's Note

Not much to say.

Reviews

[aris.giannakidis]

That is a very beautiful poem!

[just is]

This is a most lovely write, like it so much!

[Annique le Roux]

i feel like im endlessly repeating myself but thats only because all your poems evoke this strange feeling in me...
i love this:
A face saturated in memories,
Beauty trickled by gold.

"a face saturated by memories"....so beautiful...wow

amazing...you really have an amazing talent for portraying your feelings...and it feels as if i experience every emotion with you...

[Ama May Cooper]

Beautifully written my dear =]
and hey aint spoken to you in time
a well woven peace i feel your longing and sympathise with your pain, it brought a tear to my eye