Love Bound by Friendship

Love Bound by Friendship

A Poem by FANTASYKNIGHT
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well, the title says it all...

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Never ending emotions,
intertwine with my thoughts.
Love bound by friendship,
your name across my heart.
 
Gazing eyes shine with wonder,
mystery ripples across my mind.
Enchanted raindrops trickle this pool,
silently echoes this beauty divine.
 
Concealed by a cloak of eternal care,
Love fights it's enemy, such loyal deceit.
This painful friendship I so selflessly share,
your smile and laughter is everything to me.
 
As I drown in your beauty,
I get lost in my mind.
A passionate kiss,
your lips upon mine.
 
I crave it all,
your warm embrace.
Your sweet subtle whisper,
to see your angel face.
 
My mind wonders on,
as irony flows.
For this is Love bound by friendship,
yet my heart still follows.
 
For all I can give,
and all I can have.
Is my love and eternal care,
in this friendship we share.
 

© 2009 FANTASYKNIGHT


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"your name across my heart"

Beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


aaaah! this is driving me crazy....your poetry, its so emotive that i literally feel what you are trying to convey...
my favourite verse :
My mind wonders on,
as irony flows.
For this is Love bound by friendship,
yet my heart still follows.

i like the mention of irony....and how you describe it
well done, again
i love it

Posted 15 Years Ago


Never ending emotions,
intertwine with my thoughts.
Love bound by friendship,
your name across my heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago


After reading something like this, what can you possibly say! You have a gift, don't be afraid to show it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Thank you for entering my contest. How heart wrenching it is to love someone and not be able to live out that love. A few spelling errors need to be repaired, but that is the greatest change I advise. Well I do offer one other thing. I recommend either rhyming throughout the entire piece or not at all. Either way it will be a beautiful and somber piece. Good work and God bless!

Posted 15 Years Ago


It's about love. Romantic images!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Cape Town, Stellenbosch, South Africa



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