Mystical Creature

This is a attempt to describe the amazing senstaions and feelings that flooded me when i swam in the sea and suddenly found my self surrounded by dolphins this Chrismas.

With overwhelming mystique,

like ghosts they flash and appear.

Their deep dark shadows,

Entrance this sense of fear.

This awesome array,

of magnificant creatures,

Slowly, my fear dies away.

Reflecting on the water,

the sunshine sparkle enhances,

Such a serene presence,

of nature enriched.

A sensation so unique,

the combined essence,

of human, and such mystical creature.

This is the extraordinary bonding,

of mankind and nature.

Author's Note

It is very abstract and the stanzas are uneven, but its not supposed to be a fairy tale poem, its a rough thought, a amazing memory, and a amazing experience on paper.

Reviews

[Cherrie]

Sometimes broken thoughts and images weave a picture much more satisfying than a documentary of the event, this was very nicely done, I enjoyed it very much

[Void Unspoken]

talk about one of a kind! great job! on to reading more of your work!!!! yay!

[ScorpioPoet]

i think you've captured the feeling quite well. great poem!

[Annique le Roux]

oh my word! this is so well written! well done, you really captured the senses and thoughts, desires and needs in this poem! wow!
just one bit of advice: 'extraudinary' should be spelt 'extraordinary'
beautifully written !