Dawn of Love

This is the poem that was never meant to be, although i was convinced, but sometimes your feelings are deveiving, still love her loads. My best friend.

 

Your Angel face

Your eyes so shine

Your Beautiful hair

Strands of pure gold

Your amazing smile

a mystery to me

Your tempting lips

I struggle to withhold

Your eyes meet mine

a friendship stare

But you tear my heart

this which i endure

I crave your embrace

seek comfort in your arms

A stroke apon my skin

by your warm touch

I whisper in your ear

"I Love you"

Down your cheek rolls a tear

I wipe it away

a comforting kiss

This is what i crave

this is what i want

I just never had the courage

to tell you up to now

Where we are here

I still crave all this

But will a princess like you

ever return my desire 

Author's Note

It was feelings that were i concealed and hid for a long time, and this is when i couldnt keep it in anymore. be judgmental, i don't mind

Reviews

[Breyten Bach]

Hi Josh, Haven't been here for a looooooong time. Glad your'e still poeming...

[Daydreamer54]

Aw, cute and sweet! She might feel the same way after reading this... or she probably already likes u more than just a friend. Great poem!

[Annique le Roux]

i speak from experience that descriptions and emotions are easier to make when they come from personal experience...so thats what makes this so powerful....brilliant, like all the rest

[Kenya J]

I really like this poem because I can relate to it... Good Job!!!

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

This is touching seriousely. I know that feeling, I used to do the same thing so I know exactly where your coming from. Hope life is great with you!

[Adelia Alighieri]

I like your emotional side; you write down anything that provokes you emotionally...This poem is great, exactly the piece I waited from you..Keep Writing.
Cheers!