Stabbed and broken

I mostly write love poems, and i never got any appreciation or gratitude from any of the girls i wrote it to. I just got rejected, and was broken hearted for the first time. so this what came from my feelings, through the pen, unto the paper.

So silent and quite it all seemed

Though fury was boiling like a raging sea.

The slues is open, the river is flowing,

my heart is broken, the tears are streaming.

My trust, my hope hope i gave to you,

gracefully accepting my heart to.

Showing your gratitude i was returned a heart,

stabbed and broken feeling like all was lost.

Sad and calm i might have been,

but a tornado was raging inside me.

The sky's were weeping and mountains trembling,

the Earth was shaking and universe rumbling.

So silent and quite it all seemed,

though all of this is raging in me.

 

 

Author's Note

This is my first depressive poem, i have never felt this way, and as always, i wrote my feelings down in the form of a poem.

Reviews

[Annique le Roux]

well, firstly its hard to understand that you never got any appreciation from the girls you have written for because your poetry is...well....amazing...
maybe im different, i don't know
i like this, its short but you still portray your feelings....
don't worry, one day you'll find a girl who appreciates it ;)