True Beauty

This is a poem written for my friend Paige, to show no matter what people say bout beauty and look, she will always be Beautiful from true beauty.

 

 

Beauty is mistaken,

and beauty is deceived.

For no one really know, 

what true beauty is.

 

True beauty is not a look, 

not a frown nor a smile, 

Nor vivd blue eyes, 

that shines for miles.

 

True beauty is unknown, 

locked away as a secret. 

And can only be seen,

once the riddle is completed.

 

This riddle is simple,

but still no one gets it.

Are their minds so cripple,

tha no one would seek it?

 

For picture perfect,

someone might be.

Yet this type of beauty,

still is not true.

 

Looks are so deceiving,

and is nothing but a bonus.

True beauty lies within,

From the heart it is revealed.

 

(Many will seek this,

But only one will find it.

For you are special,

and he will know this).

Author's Note

This is not a love poem, but a friendship poem. it might be a little brutal to some people who has the wrong mindset about it. But it's a personel poem for a friend.

Reviews

[x lan3 x]

love it :) x

[Annique le Roux]

ah this is beautiful...
i think you have seen past what every other guy stumbles at and that is outer beauty...even though she is just a friend, its great that you caught the deeper part of beauty that girls are always wanting guys to see...
:)

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

its the truth though, even if it is brutal. It is the honest truth about beauty. it takes a true poet to come up with something like that and make it make sense like that...i like this one too...

[Ebs]

Heyy awesome poem. Really well written. I think she'll love it.

Good write

Ebs

[Servant Ties]

Yes, I agree I hope she loves it becuase no matter what anybody tells her, as long as she knows that she's pretty and her friends think that, then that's all she needs

[Paige-Louise]

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

[Legion]

Hope she appreciates it. Nicely done.