Love so Deceiving

It's about how confusing Love can be, and what it can do to you...

I feel like i'm drowning,

in a sea of emotions.

Constantly thinking,

about all the complications.

 

I am saturated by Love,

my heart is being tortured.

Overwhelmed by what i have,

yet still seeking all the answers.

 

Again Love has deceived me,

I am tangled in its riddles.

Now forever will it shield me,

to see true Love and all within?

 

Like mist it drifts

and blocks my sight.

To find my direction,

to see the light.

 

Now all within me 

craves to know.

what true Love is, 

and where it goes.

 

So hard to face,

yet still true.

Love has deveived me,

there's nothing i can do.

               Josua Blom

Author's Note

Be critical as you want, i don't really care, i take any advice, and i am 15 years old...

Reviews

[Annique le Roux]

wow its true hey....drowning in a sea of emotions....yup, thats love...
decieving, torturing, complicated....its all true...

[Haley Smith]

This is really great! I like it a lot. It flows really well and it's beautifully written. Good job :)

[Elizabeth]

This is elegant... and unpretentious. Well done.

[Legion]

Love has deveived me, - "decveived"?

Not too bad. A few years more and you will be able to really decipher what it can do to you.

[Servant Ties]

*shuffles foot* Um...I'm a little jelous of you because I can't write poetry even if I really tried my hardest