Stay with me

I wrote this to someone i really love, and i was literally hypnotized.

 

 

I am hypnotized, I am amazed,

that something so beautiful, would come my way.

I have not thought, I have not dreamt,

that magic so wonderful, would fill me to contempt.

whenever we're together, whenever i'm with you,

my heart shines like the sun, and I hope yours do to.

To a Princess so wonderfull, I only hope to be,

a Prince charming...on his white, noble steed.

When I hear the sound of your sweet voice,

my heart goes warm, and I rejoice.

For always I wish, and always to be,

that you my dear Princess will stay with me.

   

                              Josua Blom

Author's Note

It's not supposed to be ellegant or anything, i wrote it in a rush, so it's not perfect.

Reviews

[Ebs]

I loved it. I think it had some raw emotion that was really beautiful. I agree that it could be polished but
other wise a good poem

good write

ebs

[S.J.Floreen]

It needs a bit of polishing up, but it is a very lovely start.