The magical pianist

The magical pianist

A Poem by FANTASYKNIGHT
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It's a fugurative passage i wrote on a pianist, which i hope, will one day be me.

"

 

 

The music is sweet and crisp.

Every chord played by those talented hand harmonize with the next.

The audience can only sit and listen,

hypnotized by this aray of musical magic casted over them.

Every single note is played with such passion,

that unto every ear it befalls, can only listen in aw.

The man at the piano, oblivious as it is to him,

has just made his name great.

As he plays the last few chords,

and the magic draws back into those hands.

The stunned audience start to raise a thunderous applause.

 

       Josua Blom

© 2008 FANTASYKNIGHT


Author's Note

FANTASYKNIGHT
Not much to review, just a discriptive passage.

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you love music...and though i know that already...i can definitely see it through this piece...brilliant...i hope you get your dream one day

Posted 15 Years Ago


I liked how you described the ability to create music as magic that flows from the hands to return at the end of the concert.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Good piece. As someone who loves music, I feel this. One note though:

casted - should just be cast

Posted 16 Years Ago


As you say a descriptive passage I would say a most descriptive passage
You message is extremely clear expressed in well written poetic prose Spoilt only by a lack of spell check and a final edit before posting.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 8, 2008
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FANTASYKNIGHT
FANTASYKNIGHT

Cape Town, Stellenbosch, South Africa



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A few forewords: Outgoing, extreme, sports, crazy, musical, creative, loving, romantic. The first impression of me could suggest anything but poetry, here's some more about me... My name is Josu.. more..

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