The Lightning Dragon

The Lightning Dragon

A Poem by FANTASYKNIGHT
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I just LOVE thunder and rain and clouds, so this is'nt the only one on that subject you'll be reading....

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Lightning, some people find,

is rather frightening.

I find the slash of the flash,

n aesthetically calming facade.

I fantasize the sight of the light,

as the teeth of a fierce growling dragon.

As fir the thunder, I tell you now,

is a phenomenally amazing wonder.

For that fowl howl, where it comes from,

no one has discerned.

And if you have to ascertain,

you'd rather wish you hadn’t.

You see, every time those piercing teeth,

smashes down to earth like a innocent leave.

They devour something never again to be seen,

and if you went to find that poor thing.

A heap of ash is all you will discover. 

 

© 2008 FANTASYKNIGHT


Author's Note

FANTASYKNIGHT
This was about a year and a half ago, quite abstract.

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i like it. and that was your first one? whoah!

Posted 16 Years Ago


My first poem ever, a note i should add...

Posted 16 Years Ago


hahaha, yeah, i know my spelling, is working on that now, thanks anyway,

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like it, it was very detailed and showed that you see alot of things from just an ordinarily thing as lightning, the only thing that I can tell you to work on is your spelling but other than that I loved it

Posted 16 Years Ago



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