Stop. Rewind. Play.

Press rewind,

Take me back to that moment.

I need to know

What would’ve happened

If this had been said;

What would’ve happened

If that had been done.

Play it back,

Let’s see it another time.

Stop.

Rewind.

Play it

And replay it over again.

Again and again

Until everything it was

Is no more…

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel03September2008

 

Reviews

[Lee E. Powell]

"Until everything it was
Is no more�"

If only we could.
Very well written and an awesome concept

[Adela Muresan]

Neat idea...to play things back.
I like the ending, but I think it a simple period would fit better that the suspension points ( or wathever you guys call them lolz ).

A.M.