My Surrender

I give up.

I’ve forgotten what

I started fighting for!

I went into battle with myself

Over you,

And to this day,

I don’t know who won.

It was a stupid fight.

A futile one.

And now I raise my white flag

In surrender.

I won’t fight

With you anymore.

I won’t fight

For you any longer.

I give up…

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel16October2008

 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

An extraordinary poem, with a superb ending.

[Lee E. Powell]

The ending was awesome.

"I won't fight With you anymore.
I won't fight For you any longer.
I give up�

That's pretty powerful stuff. Straight to the point!