Psychotically Yours

Do you see her

Just lying there?

Do you see the blood

In her once blonde hair?

 

Can you believe

That you once loved that face?

Oh, the horror,

Such a disgrace.

 

Her body, mutilated and broken

Way beyond repair,

Lies there wrapped in bloody sheets.

Damn, why did you have to care?

 

This would never have happened

If you had chosen me.

I couldn’t stand watching you love her,

Can you not see?

 

I hated her pretty little face,

That perfect white smile!

I hated everything about her,

Her damn legs that went on for miles!

 

So I crushed in that face

With a swing from my bat.

Oh she screamed –

She didn’t like that!

 

Then I stabbed her chest

Around fifty times, maybe more.

Then I stabbed another time,

Just to settle the score.

 

Watching her blood

Seep deep into the sheets,

I knew this b***h

Had come to her defeat.

 

Looking at the woman

You once called “the one”,

I stuck my hand in my pocket

And pulled out my gun.

 

I blew out

What was left of her brains.

Oh the beauty

As your walls it stained.

 

Before I leave

I write a little note on the door:

I sign off my artwork

“Psychotically Yours”.

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel18August 2008

 

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is almost cute. o.o;; But my perceptions of "cute" are a bit off.
I could imagine reading it while listening to Nekromantix. XD feels very horrorpunk/psychobilly

I really did enjoy this though! I like how it kind of got you into the head of the person telling this tale, like you got a front row seat to a serial killer matinee! =D

[Thanatos Darkraven]

Ooh, very dark indeed. I enjoyed reading it. Good description. Oh how many times I've wanted to wander down this path after being left for someone else. Excellent job capturing the feelings of betrayal and hatred. I loved this one

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

I laughed and cried. Nah, I just laughed. This poem was the s**t.

[An owl on the moon]

Darkly brilliant and haunting in scope! Vivid description that feels almost like we're viewing photographs at the scene of the crime. Creepy!

Craig