Looking In Your Eyes

Don't know what it was
But something clicked
When I looked into your eyes
And you are the one I picked
That I would love
Till my blood runs dry
And that with that love
I hope you can confide in me and cry.

So when your stars are blue
Know I'll be there for you
And when I say I love you
My words are true,
You think of our friendship
While I dream of holding you in my arms
I don't know about you, but I want more than friendship
Because you draw me to you with your beautiful eyes and loving heart

Reviews

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I love this poem!!!! It's so easy to connect to, and it's sweet. I have no critizism what so ever!!!!! Fantabulous job!!!!