Your Precious Heart

Never have the one you love.

Rejection is a hard shove.

On, your precious heart

Though it may skip a beat,

Someone will beat.

Your precious heart

 

Cracked and broken,

Your heart will be frozen.

Oh, your precious heart

Love will help as much as it will kill,

Love is a wonderful yet disastrous pill.

For, your precious heart

Author's Note

This is a copy so I can put it in a contest

Reviews

[Cerebriation]

This is a good write. It needs some structural stability, but a great idea nonetheless. Keep it up. We all have much to learn!

[0_o Abbie]

well whatever this is, it's really cool. I love it. Especially the part "Love will help as much as it will kill, Love is a wonderful yet disastrous pill." It was really great. I love it. :D

[Blood.Red.Nobodies]

Josh... You realize you can put the original in the contest... Click on the contest and click submit or something... Go on ooVoo and I can show youXD