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A Poem by Joshua
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One of my sappy love poems

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I sit here hanging my head in disgrace
I'm thinking and all I see is your face
Trying to find the right words to say
As I try to spit them out they just slip away
Because deep inside I know nothing is good enough
It's hard to do good in a world that's quite rough
I thought you were meant for me, you were my jewel
I was there to be the keeper of your heart, your constable
Instead you put my heart in a knot
It seems before I've been in this same plot
So why can't I change this story's end
And finally make you my best friend

© 2012 Joshua


Author's Note

Joshua
So I'm not sure on the title, they seem to be the hardest for me. I kind of just threw this on paper one day while thinking and I liked it but I would like to know what others think of it, so constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated thank you all.

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Joshua

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A shock to myself is that I actually enjoy to write, but the problem is I don't like failure so I want to try this and see what people think about my style and where I am in the writing world. more..

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