Lit-Nauseum

30 second write

Godforsaken
selling anger
bloody printed
pathetic paper
I have a certain
method waiting
self assured
opinion stating
We're the lost ones
all together
wrapping necks and
feet in leather
All the lasting
moments carried
motivated
self destruction.

© 2008 J.benjamin Rose

Author's Note

Like I said, wrote it in 30 seconds

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Silent Kim aka mizmetap..

Nice flow and creative orginal words. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Poison

Love the whole thing, but these lines struck the hardest:

"I have a certain
method waiting
self assured
opinion stating
We're the lost ones
all together
wrapping necks and
feet in leather "

Wish I could write something that great in 30 seconds....

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clarisse Nanoit

Amazing flow. "motivated self destruction"... What a thought. I already told you I love this, but just thought I'd post it as a review also. Fantastico. :P
KH

Posted 16 Years Ago

Legion

An interesting piece for a 30 second write and the flow is done well also.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 16, 2008

Author

J.benjamin Rose

Chapel Hill, NC

About

Born In Alabama, I have traveled through fourteen countries, been shot, had bombs explode around me, been divorced, have a son by a wonderful person (and excellent writer) and had hundreds of jobs.. more..