A Cold Night

These are lyrics written and edited, was one of the first poems i ever wrote and made it into a song, please enjoy

its such a cold night

i wish i had love

i take your hand now

they'll gun us down

i cant control now

this fires catching lust

hold me tight

dont break touch

back and forth yeahhh

we're rolling ohhh

                    

you're more than on my mind

dance child to the night  

broken wind, leave trouble behind

you're more than on my miyes sweetie pie

you're enshrined

the night is golden

cause you're here now

im losin it

you dream catcher

hold me dearest

try to break through

up and over

this creation is true

my imagination

speculation and truth

have made it out now

on this evening gloom

you're more than on my mind

dance child to the night

broken wind, leave trouble behind

you're more than on my mind

yes sweetie pie

you're enshrined

its such a cold night

i know i have you

brace yourself now

for what we'll do

its such a cold night

im holdin you

you're enshrined now

on this evening gloom

Reviews

[M]

It will be a great song, good follow and structure.