This Chaos

Take a step

Into the deepest blue sea

Explore the depths of perception

Reaching our spirits

And punishing our minds

Moonlight minds

Takes us for a lifetime

This chaos

Making amends

To our once fragile minds

This chaos

Exploring a once unknown pleasure

This chaos

Reinventing our half tainted brains

Take a step

Into the deepest blue sea

Into... This chaos

Reviews

[M]

written well it's such a great one and good use of words and analogy.

[Carlton Rolle]

Anything unknown has the power to create chaos within our minds. I like this piece a lot. Thanks.

[Chaz Hemsworth]

Well written. Reminds me of how I think my favorite music is complex, while most pop songs, while enjoyable, lack depth. Only by experiencing and challenging the brain do we derive true pleasure.