MemoriesA Story by Josh121A story i wrote when i had had nothing to write about. it consists of two main parts or views. One is the part of the writer creating the story and the other is one of the charcters in the story.What
am I writing about? Writing about. Write about. A kid. A kid with sneakers.
They are called “sneakers” because he once lived in America but lives in
Australia. He is not quite short but not quite tall either. Greasy blond hair.
Freckles. He is wearing a red T-shirt and blue denim jeans, frayed at the
bottom. He is sitting on a wooden bar stool, in a
small dark room. Moonlight filters in through a greasy window in front of him.
A white clock ticks noisily on the opposite wall. There is a white door to his
right. It has a red handle. The boy walks towards the door and slowly reaches
for the handle. The door opens. A girl stands in the door frame and says ‘Dean’. What
now? What now? Now. Now. Now
Dean is confused. He steps back. She steps forward. ‘Who
are you?’ He
breaks the silence. ‘Luciel.
Your sister.’ Confusion
crackles in the air. Denial. ‘What…
But I don’t have a sister.’ ‘Yes.
I am your sister you never knew about.’ She
approaches Dean. Outstretched arm. A photo framed by her white hand. Two kids.
Two greasy blond heads. Same faces. But one the face of a girl. The other a
boy. The boy. Dean. Behind them a carpet of green. Above blue sky. Below gold
sand. Dean recognises the boys’ face but not his ‘sisters’. He takes the photo
from Luciel and turns it over. July 2003. Dean & Luciel, age six. A
sound. A distraction. Soft. No loud. A loud sound. Like. Like. Like a… Outside
a car horn bellows in the stiff night air. Nerves grip Luciel. ‘Come.
We need to get out. We need to go. Now!’ She
reaches for Deans’ hand. He stands staring at a memory he can’t
remember. Cold hands grasp the boys wrist and drag him towards the door.
Through the door. An alley. A black van. The door slides open and a man leans
out. ‘Luciel,
get him in the van now!’ Luciel
pushes dean towards the vans’ open door and onto the faded leather seats. The
door slid closed behind him and the van sped off with a bang, leaving Luciel
behind. ‘Hey!
What about Luciel?’ Dean screams. Dean
tries to get up but a hand presses to his mouth and nose. In it a handkerchief
laced with chloroform. He can smell the acrid chemicals. He struggles to break
free. Black. Everything is going black. As the light fades he hears Luciels’
voice in his head. ‘Remember,
Dean. Remember.’ Memories are like smoke despite the evidence in front of you. © 2012 Josh121Author's Note
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StatsAuthorJosh121Fingal, Tasmania, AustraliaAboutHi, My name is josh. I am 16 years old. I live in a small town in Tasmania,Australia. I love reading and writing. I have written a few short stories and entered in one contest but mainly I woul.. more..Writing
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