You and I

Another break up poem

You and i were ment to be
at least thats how it felt to me 
now ur gone and i am me
left with only your memory
the one i love the one u hate
our first love our first date
i still love but u only hate
ill always love till im to the gate
ill never give up on what has to be our fate

Reviews

[Misled Legend]

Oh No! Grammar nazi time xD I automatically had problems with the "ur" (your) and "u" (you) parts. I agree with watch_the_world

[watch_the_world]

this is so powerful! at the part that goes like "the one i love the one u hate"
there should be two lines, it kinda confused me there, lol.
"ill always love till im to the gate
ill never give up on what has to be our fate"
LOVE this line! xD