Vampire

I met a Vampire

She drew me in to a deep black shadow,

all that could be seen was the blood red hunger

in her eyes, she came close and spoke these words,

"dont be afraid young one, do not despare. i've come with

something to share...."

of the following day i awoke with a burning in my

throat, so now i walk sun and moon alike,

looking to feed and fill the thirst

and emptiness i now have inside, for never seeing

my loved one's faces,so i dont have them witness my

blessing, ... and their cures

Reviews

[Misled Legend]

I liked this as well. I saw a few errors (Dang I'm becoming a grammar nazi) but other than that it was cool.

[watch_the_world]

this is MUCHHH! better than that twilight s**t, keep it up bro xD

[Lia]

This is a great dark and eerie piece. Thanks for sharing.