Me

Bitter by nature, or spiteful by choice?
Your blood surely boils at the sound of my voice
This untactful approach will never cease to appaul,
As I intrude and encroach do I make your skin crawl?

Fouled by nuture, or merely a fault in the breed?
Better avoided they say, I can't help but agree.
Prone to manipulate, rotten to the core,
Can I just stipulate, I couldn't agree more.

I twist your every word, I even twist mine,
A provocative fiend, absent in more than just spine....
Remorseful at least? Hardly, this hearts made of stone.
But the fate of this beast, will be suffered alone.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words and emotion made the words come alive. I like the powerful statements in this poem.
"I twist your every word, I even twist mine,
A provocative fiend, absent in more than just spine...."
I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow .. Hits like a hammer .. Strong emotion felt here ..

I like .. Jasmine ..

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Wow, so nicely done, Love the rhyme scheme and flow. This is very well written and so emotional, I enjoyed this. Nicely written!