Me

Bitter by nature, or spiteful by choice?
Your blood surely boils at the sound of my voice
This untactful approach will never cease to appaul,
As I intrude and encroach do I make your skin crawl?

Fouled by nuture, or merely a fault in the breed?
Better avoided they say, I can't help but agree.
Prone to manipulate, rotten to the core,
Can I just stipulate, I couldn't agree more.

I twist your every word, I even twist mine,
A provocative fiend, absent in more than just spine....
Remorseful at least? Hardly, this hearts made of stone.
But the fate of this beast, will be suffered alone.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words and emotion made the words come alive. I like the powerful statements in this poem.
"I twist your every word, I even twist mine,
A provocative fiend, absent in more than just spine...."
I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Time's The Bond]

Sounds like me to be honest

[SM Davis]

artful meter in rhyme. Nicely done.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Fabulous and rage felt, responsibility taken
but a heart of stone must melt sometime....Right?
Great write!

[The Unknown Rose]

Interesting

[MetBySunlight]

:O it's awesome (: so powerful. Love the structure of this!

[KAREN]

Love the rhyme and the flow, powerful strong write!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was a powerful poem...you made it so intense and there was so much emotion ...but when i read it i could also feel the pain of the other person/people... the rhyming was amazing and it flowed perfectly...

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Strong emotions within this deeply intense write. Nicely done!!

[ATG]

This was pretty good. It was interesting. I got a sense of low self esteem from it.