You Don't Know

Not everyone who is right is right

What we gotta do in a cold stone era?
Fire beats fire in the next out seller
We believe everyone's action is a felony
I write my wrongs when they stop tellin me
Don't ever tell me to tell you what you already know
I got a big mouth cause you can't stay faithful to your wife
With a bucket full of hoes
Oh I'm sorry, am I too smart for your bad neglagation?
Throw a book at you, I got a bad education
Read my rights where your wrongs aren't dismissive
I come through with the facts now you wanna be submissive
Walk the atonement like every other critic


BY LEWIS DEWSON

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

most who judge probably need judging more than anyone...

harshest critics will get the worst reviews in the end...

this one kind of "stomps its feet" and really gains momentum towards a really sharp last line.

j.

[Warrior]

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