A nice way to relax and "spit some flows." haha, Just a side note, I really don't think that high of myself...just went with the flow and thats how it came out. I think I got into the mindset of a person that rap battles. The only problem is that I wasn't battling anyone. haha. Please enjoy my "freestyle."
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haha, i did enjoy this! this really flows and i can totally imagine somebody (you ;)) winning a rap battle with this... lot of clever lines here i liked -- 'baby jesus called, said i'm the new miracle' is so funny and biting... great job! lol don't compromise your swagger, i say...
My name is alyssa and i'm from the hood,
they call me lyssalicious cuz they know i'm good.
they rap about my rhymes
or how i drop a line
them boys they come around
making me sound
like a superfly girl
with ribbons and curls
i'm not the type of girl you see
in the streets
working that corner for some sheets
or the type of girl you see
in the club working that pole
cuz she thinks shes good
i'm the type of girl you see
on the stage
workin that music
like its a new age
music is my life
and i rap good
so call me lyssalicious
cuz you know i'm good!
I raise the dead and turn the water into wine.
One flick of my wrist, I'll turn your girl into mine.
The funniest bar. LOL. The lyrics were clever and the syllable count helped it flow really well. You should do some more, minus the "Thug Life" thingy at the end. LOL.
haha, i did enjoy this! this really flows and i can totally imagine somebody (you ;)) winning a rap battle with this... lot of clever lines here i liked -- 'baby jesus called, said i'm the new miracle' is so funny and biting... great job! lol don't compromise your swagger, i say...
I'm a simple man with a complex mind.
I was born and raised in southeastern Idaho, and wouldn't change a thing. I'm a young 21-year-old Chicano who has a deep understanding for his culture.
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