The Vase

The Vase

A Poem by Joanne Jayne

I am in a vase

It is overturned

I look at this disc of freedom and I laugh

I am safe here in the vase

Despite the settling insanity

I cannot let go of you

My comfort

My love

© 2015 Joanne Jayne


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Rye
This is a wonderful write, nicely done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not a poet just a reader.

I liked the imagery.
I liked the unsettling feel of the piece and it is a real positive that there isn't a reveal at the end

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sounds like a trapped genie to me......although, maybe this genie needs her "master" more than what he needs her....:)

Great job in writing a novel in just a few lines....:)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Joanne Jayne
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A Poem by Joanne Jayne