Time

Time

A Poem by Joanne Jayne

It’s nice to meet you.

Let’s be friends.

I need you.

This is forever.

Let me sleep a while longer.

You are far too early.

You have made me late.

You are taking too long.

Hurry up.

I wish I could see more of you.

I have put you to waste.

You have taken away everything I love.

Where have you gone?

I took you for granted.

Slow down. please.

© 2015 Joanne Jayne


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Rye
This is such a wonderful write

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is a very marvelous piece. How changeable we are! How quick to change! You have wrapped up a whole relationship, from start to finish. No wonder you are out of breath. I am too and all I did was read it again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Its like you are talking to a clock haha.
Very different, but great piece.
Sure everyone can relate and feels this same way about time.
Wonderful piece :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a roller coaster ride lol...nice writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have me all over the place with this one. I don't know where I am but, I have been in all these places. Very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Joanne Jayne
Joanne Jayne

United Kingdom



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