Astray

Astray

A Poem by Jorge Ron

I walk from a distance
staring straight at my desires
different personalities
they over look at the values
a duel between right and wrong
controlled to whom admire
No longer
no longer 
no longer
When dark figures take control
the still mind will take the fall
a scream so loud
it's heard from the past
my shadow runs
my eyes look back
No longer
no longer
no longer
A deaf sensation takes control
all weapons banned and safed from all
abominations walk the street
disturbing thoughts for you and me
No longer
no longer
no longer

© 2014 Jorge Ron


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Quite an interesting write. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago


Thank you!
I like the repetition. Astray is a duel between right or wrong indeed...Excellent...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago

Thanks man. I got robbed and decided to right about it. lol
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).........

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Jorge Ron
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Venezuelan I'm 16. I like writing songs, and making music. i write about how i feel. https://soundcloud.com/jorge-ron more..

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