With My Mind

With My Mind

A Poem by Jorge Ron

This room is full of people
they're watching me 
I can hear the scratch on the door 
they're looking for me
and I can feel them write on my back
they're feeding of me
and I can only trust my head
because my eyes lie to me

And my eyes are just like the light
just a flash of concern
and I've tried to lock the door 
But they still remain

No 
go away
but they can still play
with my mind and I 
with my mind and I

And i've tried to peek through the window
but my vision is red
and I've tried to clean this mess
but it's the stains that I've kept

And I should say goodbye
to a life wished away
they're pulling through my brain
but I've shaved my head 

No
get away
but they can still play
with my mind and I 
with my mind and I 

© 2014 Jorge Ron


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Rim
Great work! and Great imagery with the display of visual words !

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago

Thanks! this was a song about shizophrenia.

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Jorge Ron
Jorge Ron

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Venezuelan I'm 16. I like writing songs, and making music. i write about how i feel. https://soundcloud.com/jorge-ron more..

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