Coke For The Kids

Coke For The Kids

A Poem by Jorge Ron

Mother brings another cover
while my head rest in her sholder
she starts to cry
she's getting me high 
my head is pouding 
my body is ice

The bugs in my skin
nails that bleed

I can feel the euphoria
the holes in my body
the holes my heart 
a scratch on my face
oh, daddy i'm sick again

The bugs in my skin 
nails that bleed

Drinking all my mother's milk 
A disease who lives with a virus
i chew and i chew
I cant untie this
my body is ice
my head is pouding

The bugs in my skin
nails that bleed

© 2014 Jorge Ron


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GZ
Interesting poem. Nice visualization of the images proposed. I loved it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The bugs in my skin
nails that bleed........ i actually had a graphic visualization of this :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Rim
I F*****g LOVE this ! "Coke" and "Kids" Always grab my attention. And I love the " I chew and I chew " . Brilliant .

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago

wow thanks so much!
Some dark s**t, man. Nice though. I liked it a lot.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago

thanks, it's a song that tells a story of abusive parents that drug and rape their kids. your s**t's.. read more

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Jorge Ron
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Venezuelan I'm 16. I like writing songs, and making music. i write about how i feel. https://soundcloud.com/jorge-ron more..

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