Die Tonight

Die Tonight

A Poem by Jorge Ron

I colapse on the ground
in front of her eyes 
isolation
goes through the mind

and the sounds from the window 
just couldn't breathe
they mentioned
blood on the time

I may die tonight
die tonight
die tonight

I cut the veins on my risk 
to bring other smiles
tears from the fear
they cry like a child

In the stairs 
where my life fell and turned black and white
going down in a spiral
in the need of a light to shine

I may die tonigh
die tonight
die tonight

And the screams from the sound 
are always in there
i can never count
my head needs repair
only my soul can control this affair
opened caskets 
my death is declared

© 2014 Jorge Ron


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Rim
Loved it , and the " Die tonight Die tonight " feels like it's echoed because the narrator is isolated .. Awesome

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago

thanks! its not supposed to be echoed, but you just gave me a great idea!
Rim

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :D

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Jorge Ron
Jorge Ron

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Venezuelan I'm 16. I like writing songs, and making music. i write about how i feel. https://soundcloud.com/jorge-ron more..

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