Confusion

Confusion

A Poem by Jorge Ron

Confusion strikes hard
and my head is out of form
to face the fears that i couldnt control
they called my name once again
to tell me i just couldnt understand
and they screamed my mistakes
from my past
staring in silence and confusion
i just didnt know how to act 

Dictate my every word and move
forced against the wall
with fears to choose
facing the fact
that i will loose
and the sounds of despair 
with desperation
are controlled be where

and they pulled the strings away
for my shadow never sleeps
night and day
and the act of effort 
can be hard to play
from the effects of distortion
ive heard a vision and sound 
that told me 
what to say
what to know
how to feel
how to act 
and what to play 

© 2014 Jorge Ron


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i can feel the words in my soul. As if the lyrics were written be Ian Curtis himself

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago

this is the greatest thing someone's ever told me.
Jorge Ron

10 Years Ago

joy division is a great influence on me

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Added on May 25, 2014
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Jorge Ron
Jorge Ron

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Venezuelan I'm 16. I like writing songs, and making music. i write about how i feel. https://soundcloud.com/jorge-ron more..

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