Youth
A Poem by
Jorge Peppertrees
Hair sliding brush
Five years old
Mommy
Needs met
Simple contentment
Routine
Everything new
Young one, you know all
and nothing
© 2017 Jorge Peppertrees
Reviews
You have captured youths innocence in an enigmatic alluring way, brevity at its brilliant best!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you :) I have been working to correct wordiness.
its a shame the innocence is lost in growing up for those moments are special
Posted 7 Years Ago
its a shame the innocence is lost in growing up for those moments are special
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
If only we had known.
7 Years Ago
yes and if only we could protect. nice writing Jorge.
This is a wonderful read. Savor all these moments because they grow so quickly.
And Happy Canada Day
Posted 7 Years Ago
This is a wonderful read. Savor all these moments because they grow so quickly.
And Happy Canada Day
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thanks, I am learning to.
I connect with this a lot. Got a little daughter and that's right, she knows all haha. Although some things surprise me, she understands better than I do sometimes. Thanks for sharing!
Posted 7 Years Ago
I connect with this a lot. Got a little daughter and that's right, she knows all haha. Although some things surprise me, she understands better than I do sometimes. Thanks for sharing!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thanks, fellow Canadian! Happy Canada Day!
7 Years Ago
Happy Canada Day!
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Added on July 2, 2017
Last Updated on July 2, 2017
Author
Jorge Peppertrees San Jose, CA
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My name is Heather aka Jorge. I have used writing as a way to express myself since about middle school, when I really got into writing songs and poems. Having never taken a single writing class, pleas..
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