Ruins

Rising form the Rocky Earth

Brick by Brick was built

An Orange wall and Tower Tall

To look upon the fields

Fields of Rock and Dusty Dirt

Where nothing green appears

Lay Beneath the castles view

And not a sound was heard

Reviews

[Devon Bagley]

I'm not usually one for poems, but I like this one a lot. You really nailed the rhythm and flow.
I have nothing to recommend about the poem itself, just point out a couple of those minor errors that everybody makes. In the first line, is form supposed to be from? And I guess if you wanted to be super nit-picky, castles should be castle's?
Seriously, it's so good that all I have to say is about the stupid spelling errors. Well done.