Its Raining

Outside its rainning,

It wet and cold.

There are puddles in the road,

Every time i jump into one im thinking of you.

And your perfect laugh.

There are big raindrops falling,

Everytime one hits me,

I think of the funy times we had,

dancing in the rain.

There is thunder,

Everytime i hear one,

I think of cuddling with you,

when you are scared.

There is lightning,

Everytime i see one,

I think of late nights,

when i sneek out to see you.

Reviews

[Nicole]

That's exactly what I think, exept with my friends. (my boyfriend dumped me...) :(
Don't think about that . I want people to be happy.

Great poem. When I read "There are puddles in the road/ every time I jump in one--" I felt like I was 5. I used to do that all the time.
Awesome job!

--- Nicole

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh I really adore this one.. brings back such memories of my childhood with my friends but also young love too.. great feeling and innocence adorn this writing .. such a youthful feeling.. keep it up.. there is a magic in your writing.. =)

[Clayton A Mccaulley]

real sweet and simple almost childish
fun to read
kind and heart warming
a good read def