Blank Canvas

Blank Canvas

A Poem by Jordan

My life was such a blank canvas.

Black and White,

Day in and Day out.

Boring and simple.

When you came in,

My blank canvas changed.

From Black and White,

To all the colors of the rainbow.

My life was no longer Boring,

or simple.

You are the reason I have yo wake up in the moring.

You are my little splash of color,

on my  Blank Canvas.

© 2009 Jordan


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This is really cute :)
It's a great comparison.
:D

Posted 14 Years Ago


That's adorable :)

"You are my little splash of color,
on my Blank Canvas."

I love that comparison. Great job :]


Posted 15 Years Ago


OoOo Good jooooobbbb Jorjor! I Like this one.


Posted 15 Years Ago


Some people come into our lives and change things for the better. You showed that in this well written piece. Your words were as colorful as a rainbow. I just wish it were longer. Kudos.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Jordan
Jordan

Oz (:, Djibouti



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Hey im Jordan. Obioiusly i like to write. Im not so good at writing poems or songs...but i love to write stories and books so i hope u like them. I am 15 and i play soccer, track and golf. My best fri.. more..

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