Coca Cola Baby

Ocean water 

Polluted sea 

Where Spongebob cannot even breathe 

Waterbirds flap their broken wings 

Torn down and swallowing the dirty liquid 

The spread of oil will never be finished

Coca cola baby 

You protest with sign in hand 

You walk solo 

And pummel land 

Your hands are bloodied with the splinters of youth 

Your attacking air 

No one will forget you 

Reviews

[Brian]

I really like the beginning, where you are talking bout the ocean and spongebob. Other than that, I really like this writing, it's different.