Venting

Venting

A Poem by Jordan Haley Nadja Black

The skys a deep blue
Like the walls of my room
Made out of rotten wood 
And a broken tooth
A sight for all eyes 
Though made just for yours 
A reality for us 
That ceased even to be my own

© 2010 Jordan Haley Nadja Black


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... excruciating ... "a reality for us" ... "that ceased even to be my own" ... for me ... as a reader ... is also a biting and powerful reflection of the delusional times we live in ... what is projected and perpetuated is so not what "is" ... a remarkable verse ... potent and striking ... (highest rating) ...

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... excruciating ... "a reality for us" ... "that ceased even to be my own" ... for me ... as a reader ... is also a biting and powerful reflection of the delusional times we live in ... what is projected and perpetuated is so not what "is" ... a remarkable verse ... potent and striking ... (highest rating) ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Jordan Haley Nadja Black
Jordan Haley Nadja Black

pretoria, South Africa



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i'm jordan. writing is my passion. i was born in toronto but i'm living in south africa. i'm twelve years old. my favorite bands are the Yeah Yeah Yeahs and Paramore. i play the guitar and want to be .. more..

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