"My Child"

My child, my child,
Listen closely to me
For what I say is not mild
For whatever will be
Will be.

My child, my child,
By my words I try to teach
For remember file
Not away what I say to reach
Your heart and your soul.

Child, open your eyes,
Look at the stars
Ask all your whys
Hide all your scars
And always say your goodbyes.

Listen to the should nots
Listen to the could nots
Listen to the no ways
Listen to the not enough days
But hear what your hearts says.

My child, my child
My words are not mild
Hear what I say
Hear it today
For this guidance
I had not the chance
To have given to me
But remember well
For what is going to be
Will be

Reviews

[Voice]

This is oh so beautiful I just love it. Amazing write...

Voice

[Silvario]

yes, i agree. i really enjoyed this piece. it was smooth and flowing and direct, which im personaly a fan of. well done. :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is excellent poetry
It looks nice,
It has soul (moral)
It flows
It speaks to the heart.

I think you have hit on something here.
I loved it.
=-----Eagle Cruagh

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is excellent poetry
It looks nice,
It has soul (moral)
It flows
It speaks to the heart.

I think you have hit on something here.
I loved it.
=-----Eagle Cruagh