Carousel

Carousel

A Poem by Jonny The Savage

Superficiality is a carousel: when you're on it, the lights and colors are beautiful but once you get off, you see how childish it really is.

© 2011 Jonny The Savage


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Jonny The Savage
10/31/08

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I know
lol
But i still love that carousel

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jonny The Savage

9 Years Ago

haha well they are fun :P
B

9 Years Ago

yes lol
but i like the way you put this together
the dizzying effect
deludes on.. read more
Jonny The Savage

9 Years Ago

haha I always loved it
I'm glad you do too :D
Yeah, I was just going through old notebooks and seeing what I had. I'll expand upon it at some point, I've always dug it.

Posted 13 Years Ago
this is a good idea
maybe take it and expand it into verse form
i think you could do a lot with this metaphor

Posted 13 Years Ago
good thing i never had that issue..i recall two people whipping me about shopping second hand for the environment? maybe growth can really happen

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Jonny The Savage
Jonny The Savage

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Aesthete, philosopher and scholar first; and a writer, poet and musician second. A rather blunt individual with no regard for dogma or taboo. A curious soul seeking the truth beyond this mortal coil. more..

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