A Wish to be Forgotten

I'll bury the hatchet...
Right in his f*****g skull.
Let the blood splatter,
I want them all to know what I've done.

Tell them all, that because of me,
He no longer breathes.
Watch them cry,
Acting like they knew him.
A funeral filled with fakes.

Fond memories fill the air,
Of a man they never knew,
That they never tried to meet
But just assumed.

Know that this is him,
What he became.
And he would be most pleased,
If you could oblige
And forget his name.

Author's Note

9/29/08

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

Love the honest violence and vengeance. A feeling that we come across more often than not and try and put efforts in holding it back.
A

[Jonny The Savage]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've always tried to write as honestly as possible, I just don't see the point in lying about myself.

[B]

this is the point of your life when you felt just fed up
it was this year
and it passed

[Jonny The Savage]

This is the 2nd or 3rd poem that I ever wrote too.
Just really about how I was tired of being a novelty.

[B]

we all get to feel this way some time
its life

[Jonny The Savage]

Truly. But I haven't let myself feel that way since.
And for this I am happy.

[B]

good
that is great :)

[Jonny The Savage]

It wasn't easy, but I feel like it's worth the effort.

[B]

I know how that is like ......

[Jonny The Savage]

Just something that has to be done, whether or not you'd like to do it in the first place.

[B]

Yup like get a flu shot
i have to get one before this city turns into a deep freezer lol

[Jonny The Savage]

haha yeah, I imagine it's much colder all the way up there :P

[B]

yes
finally my landlord turned on the heater
i was freaking freezing

[Jonny The Savage]

The trick is to just grow a beard lol.
Then you're warm and have something to play with while appearing contemplative.

[B]

lol
easy so basically i need to be a man
oh my

[Jonny The Savage]

haha hey now,
There have been bearded ladies :P

[B]

lol
that we be so creepy by the way

[Jonny The Savage]

Creepy?
Or awesome? lol.

[B]

lol
creepy lol

[Jonny The Savage]

hahaha so obviously awesome then :P.

[B]

lol
you dont listen to me much lol

[Jonny The Savage]

haha of course I'm listening, I'm just a rather jocular person.
And beards are awesome lol.

[B]

i know
you are pretty funny
lol

i once hated beards
but now i think it is quite masculine
shows alot of ferocity in character in a none physically aggressive manner
its cool

[Jonny The Savage]

haha I'm glad you feel that way.
I can annoy the living hell out of people sometimes.
haha I just think I look better with one and it's fun to play with.
So it's a net-positive.

[B]

lol
you dont annoy me

[Jonny The Savage]

haha
...yet :P

[B]

oh trust me if anything i will annoy you
i challenge everything
no one likes that

[Jonny The Savage]

I like that lol.
I'm the same way, if I don't understand something, I question it until I do.

[B]

Intelligence says that is the only way

[Jonny The Savage]

As does wisdom.

[B]

oui oui bien sur

[Jonny The Savage]

mais oui lol

[B]

you speak french oh my
now i have someone to practice with
tell me Spanish and Italian as well

[Jonny The Savage]

Actually I just googled it lol.
I'm pretty terrible at Spanish and I don't know much of anything of Italian or French.

[B]

Do you wanna start
they say the three languages are so in fluency
you can learn them together
how about that
would you like to do that
and we practice everyday
i already started

[Jonny The Savage]

We could sure as hell try.
I don't know how wonderful I'll learn them.
But I'm always willing to try.

[B]

ok
its a deal