Last moments

Last moments

A Poem by Jonny

As she stared into his eyes

He stared back into hers

“Please don’t leave,” she said

But the boy knew he had to leave

She wasn’t the only one he had to protect now

The girl also knew this

“I don’t want to but I have to,” he said

“Stay with me forever,” she said

Once his duty was complete he would make her wish come true

With a kiss on her forehead

He vanished as his scent left the thin air

Hoping not to be forgotten

Hoping once he returned home

She would still be his

© 2014 Jonny


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Beautiful and romantic write.
Filled with emotion depth and lots of love.
I loved the ending and how if she loves him she will be right there waiting for him when he returns home.
I really enjoyed the read :)
Keep on writing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sooo he's navy?
That's an interesting take really. On love that spans miles.c
I liked this

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this. Very much. But I'm new to this so what do I know? Haha good job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 2, 2014
Last Updated on January 2, 2014
Tags: salior, romance, love, tragedy, leave, part, soldier, young, military

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Jonny
Jonny

Palm Coast, FL



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